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(what do you not like about the scene?)
Then, I was a little bit confused how Hanako, who even covered every bit of her burn hand at the beginng, could strip naked like that before Hisao and... you know the story. However - I understand her reasons for that. She wanted to keep Hisao always close to her with that, she was scared to lose him otherwise etc. ... BUT whom I do not accept in this situation all too much is Hisao.
I would've liked it much more if he would've said something along the lines of "Woah stop, no - you don't need to do that. srsly" It was just all a little bit too fast for me T_T They haven't even kissed or hugged to that point of time, did they? And then, this ... For a girl which has serious issues with her body I would've liked it better if Hanako's relationship with Hisao would have developed slowly (it did!), but steady (well but then suddenly...) - Making her first time enjoyable and something she can gain strength from.
Oh god I'm rambling way too much, I'm sorry
Hanako is my favourite character and you drew her amazingly well!